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A part of me is missing you

  • Writer: Siuta Uaisele
    Siuta Uaisele
  • Apr 7, 2024
  • 2 min read


Scripting start time 12:25pm


scene 1

shots: (theme park),


2 sets and 3 or rides with people in the park(rush, cue, loading, on the ride)

shot following a family walking through, shot: bought things.


shot: guy walking down with a tiger going pass people standing inline to go a a car ride, people inside driving around the little cars.

guy 1: slow down, slow down

kids screaming

guy 2 goooo go go do it now(fade the sound and go to the next shot)


shot: speed shots(people in the park)


shot: sun setting, cruise ship(two other boats to populate the scene) coming towards the shot

shot: golden cloud, birds flying across(distant).


scene 2 (night)

shot: waterfront, people fishing

shot: closeup, two cute asian girls, half tone hoodies

shot: closer, one is frowning(Rabiya is here, he can take up one, Jia takes up one)

shot: surface water, light reflecting on the surface, blur background, (hilton hotel)

cuto: fishing floatie, waves going out. (carry the shot)

shot: side movie up the line(bg sound builds), hoodie guy looking at the ocean. hold the shot, take two other shots, from different angles with time spacer, then go to the girls


(hold is a carry)


shot: water, line tucking once, twice, stops(shot: girl 1: fish, fish)

shot: girl 2, frowning, looking a head(carry) then freeze


shot: goes through inside the ferry, people are frozen, half full(close up of a few cuties)


shot: comes on a girl(high gloss look(top deck, use the city light as the backdrop)


narration: This is stella. She is single. She is kinda lonely and she is looking for a hot guy.

(unfreeze the shot, hand coming into shot giving her a drink(gloss lux), suite uniform waiter)

Stella: thaank you(shot: follows another waiter serving 2 more drinks)


shot: arial looking down, light road concrete surface, hoodie guy looking up(hold the shot, then bring in the bgsound, then start moving the shot, round and round), then a half round going the other direction(bgsound is getting stronger), shot lowering from up high


voice: A part of me is (lowering bgsound)missing you. (did I finish this script already) Do I feel sadness(..). A little(cut to black screen voice only)(bgsound builds again). (..)

(innocentish soft feel)How bad is a little? I think very bad.


shot: sky shot(fading in), front the ground


guy: There is a star. It shines just like her. There is another star. It shines just like her too(~!)

((bird) comes into shot and flies across.)

guy: That bird.. ruining my love moment.


cut-to: two girls, unfreeze from the last shot.


This is done, I hope. I'll get another movie written


S.c Siuta Ekoti Uaisele(if you see this script somewhere, call the police)








 
 
 

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