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Rocky: only live once

Worked on a Rocky project

Rocky and Arnold Swatzerneger were pushing a car of something, just came to memory. The title is close to 'only live once.

This page will explore another title for the Rocky franchise. This franchise is not my creation, it started back in the 70's and 80's yet a favourite to most of us that gkknows about Rocky.

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Here goes nothing..

Rocky: it takes two to dance

The best form of screen writing is create a core or seed. From that seed, your writing grow into becoming a tree. At the beginning you use lots of water. Water is a connector and a building element to growth. You compromise with the different audiences. You compromise with the bigger task you know that needs to be done to get the screenwrite founding platform to be able to live. Some audience leaves the cinema or changes the movie after 20-30 minutes.

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Scene 1

shot: (musculine still shot, hold spacer)wall, inside a big mansion, engraved onto the wall. 'the ring is only too big when don't stand toe to toe with your oponent.

shot: outside, water fountain, another water fountain shot

shot: back, top looking down, 

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so you think that they are smart dogs. they are still fighting with each other up to this day. (this is similar to the previous script) the shots before was a muscle guy, sweaty and 30 percent dusted with wet mud. Restarting scene 1

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Rocky: we were the Greats once

shot: clean drive dusty road. canyon drive(put in 2 environment shots(inside shot: (hot look with the sunny), side shot or front(looking in). Fill the bus with Sly's family. 

shot: one of the capsules I designed the other day, flying through on the left of the shot(bus)(make the location different from the other screenwrite). Use the single passenger one.

shot: girls walking up towards the front, looking out the window, shot of the capsule.

girl 1: oooh, its a mako7.

Rocky: Whaaat?

shot:(skip girls are much closer to the front) girl 2: Mako7. girl 1: Why are we still rolling up in your huge bus.

(make sly's girls look hot)

shot: inside the capsule: 4 young people, one flying the capsule

shot: one of the kid munching (big bag of chips)

shot: bus, side(sharp right turn into a dusty road. (clear the road to have visual of the bus driving and the capsule flying away)

shot: coming down, little rakoon standing on the side of the road(hot sun, once the shot levels with the ground then slide the shot into the middle of tar paved road

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shot: little toyota(old and rundown coming the opposite direction) closeup on the toyota, two brown people, couple, add three other cars, one full of browns with beds and stuff filling up the car, third car comes the shot. Follow them, the kids' capsule coming into view and passes over the top, shot from the front of the first car tracking the opposite direction, the capsule gets further and further away, make the sceen feel hot and sweaty.

shot: back to the bus, girls both hugging, one wraps arms around, driving view block(rocky: I can't see the road) and urging their dad

girl 1: Why can't we buy a Mako instead.

girl2: Yea dad! the bus was the thing way~-- back in the early 2000.(girl 1: and the 90's.)

shot: girl standing(shot from the driver viewpoint)

girl 2: Too-old

girl 1: Super old​

(shot: mother(reading or something))

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Shot: son(at the back ontop of a bed) top view shot

son: It's because the u.s.a made the capsule guy angry. (lift voice)(loose vipe) Yeees, the government not only got him angry. They tried to kill him. (twist the nunciation) But there's a spaceship girl. Maybe we should try her. Be nice to her for a change. And hope that she will give us(rocky: the opportunity to buy a spaceship(finsihing off his line(shot is on rocky))

Rocky: I'll use my rocky power (this was already scripted as well.(the scripted ended at the bus scene, no.. I finished it coz it was for the kids). 

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This is a good screenwrite(very modern, should get to the billions in the non government reserve cinema ticket sales).

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