shot: (long long line waiting outsite a bakery)

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camera panning through, one kid is drippling,

feet shots: chubby feet with no shoes(dirty), another chubby feet with no shoe, dirty), class shoe(red see through(put a little sparkle as the shot comes through)), add 3 other feets, then go to head shots

 

shots

side, panning, 3 standing in a group, one mean looking boy(coming to shot as the shot goes through) cuto

shots: coming down from just above stomach height showing the other two kids, two little girls, the angry looking guy is holding one girl's hand, the other two are also holding hands.

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skip further down, carry the shot(morning early cue, other shops have their lights on.

shot rises showing the long line(coming to shot on the left is the roof of the side street shop(1200 architecture), camera turning to the place, its an open window, light up inside, 3 people having breakfast, sitting around a table. to the right is a frying pan and a pot, no lid, make the little family look middle income wealth

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nice curvy vapour coming out of the pot flowing out through the window and into the shot as the camera starts to pull back and away from the 2 level building, fade into black screen(spike transition, fade back)

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shot: inside the bakery, still moving at the same speed, going through 10 ovens full of bread and cakes and other things(some brown, some still white flour, some chocolate already cooked. (fade the shot out)

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(bgsound all the panning camera shots, if the camera rises, increase power a little. when it is a higher energy action, then increase sound power more)

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fadein: other side three layers of ovens going left to right

camera going through the stove showing the different baking.

shot:(faster speed). neck, side, back, white top with apron, sweaty and wet. (middle build baker)

shot: side, wheeling empty trolley with trays(banging sound)

shot: wheel, carry shot, wheel falls into a little pot hole on the cement floor, half long corridor, left and right are the baking station supplies

shot: left, different types of flowers stacking

shot: front of the trolley going through(there is a door infront, rustic door)

shot: display back counters birthday cakes, label says birthday cake(rustic wood feel with colour(midtone rich colour feel))

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shot: two baking tables with steel chrome(half tone) top, camera is tracking slower than the walking baker. comes to shot is a big bear cake, half ready, 75% light, infront of the bear is a label on a wooden stand that says, big momma bear cake, skip the shot closer(place infront of the label then rise slowly(bgsound). (the bear has an overall, printed on the pocket, it says, Yummy bear cake, give it colours).

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shots:

-baker hand coming into shot, on his waist is a light yellow towel, hook on his belt, pulls(cuto), closeup of the waist(bgsound the sound of the towel moving), comes off(trail wind sound), wuz

- neck, sweaty, towel comes into shot,(start bailando) give it an upbeat pull cut transpose

- other hand coming to shot grips the towel, the pulls down, up, down, cuto, neck towel moving left and right.

- camera speed curving down, stops infront of the oven(synchro the time to the beat.

- on the clap, holster the baking, bizza cutta, spoon, (this part was already written)

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shot: closeup, twinkle fingers

shot: flower twirl, carry carry

shot: slowly going through bags of flowers, the writting have little faces of the bailando band guys(Enrique)

shot goes pass, stops, back-forward, then slowly comes back to the pictures, the picture moves into a cross arms(pose), fade the sound, the picture do a little wiggle, stops, sound comes back. claps again

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shot: sound is (a little) pumping from the back, pull the shot away from the door, to the beat. but a little slower

shot: baker, starting to move to the beat, then move the shot slow, then the head starts to move to the sound, flower dust flowing into the shot.

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start the song again from the base, door opens, the flower bags  dancin into the baking room, little cut with the sound, swing the camera forward, then go.(one two movement from the dancing flower bags, carry the scene, go the the banking(cake breaking like flowers, go to the baker, go to the cakes, go to the flower

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end the shot with a big twirl of flour, it buries the baker, shot on the baker openning his eyes, pan the shot around showing the bake room covered with flour

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shot: coming down on one of the over

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The story goes

.. the baker used to be rich, then he loses everything. Went through very tough times. Did something good to a poor person, or whale, or shark. The shark game him a bag of flower. He bakes one cake. He cuts the cake into 9 pieces, sells one. came back, sells another, on the fourth piece, he came back and it reappears again, he end up selling cake for a very long time and the piece of cake always replenished itself, until one day(something something then the cake stopped replenishing itself.

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Add an emotional splike about how he uses up the energy of the whale everytime he the piece of cake replenishes. At this point, If I say that the whale turns to a skinny shark. And build around that story and how the shark became angry and scary. It will be experienced by many adult audiences as too simple and a little.. as 

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But

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..if I extend the story to tell that the some bad people ate the cake and every time that happens the whale falls ill and loses part of its flesh. then it will be enough. In order for myself or anyone to review a movie. It must be authorised by the owner of the movie or script. I was able to do do a movie review of a few movies in high school and what it lacks is the extension part. We can use our experience or summation of what we watch. Was is good. Was it enough. That experience belongs to us. But we cannot comment of the story itself or the camera work because that will be us doing a review of the movie and the work of those people. What I can say is that after a while of getting a particular thing. To get the same buzz or to get the same excitement again. It needs something else, or it needs more.